Earth's Canopy


spherical canopy hangs
over earth's crust
strawberry moon
illuminates 
nocturnal shadows glow.


6/15/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Gooden Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 7:48 PM
Great picture. Enjoyed.
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 12:09 AM
this one I even love MORE. I just love the imagery of this. thanks always for visiting my poems. I am trying to catch up here. I just hate being behind!
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June 16, 2012 at 4:22 PM
:-) Hello, Lovely Phyllis. Sometimes i can honestly feel the refreshing arch in a poem,, and to tell you the truth, your free verse glistens like a mystery in the night. love the image of your profound moon.. God Bless,..PD
Madonsela Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 11:28 AM
beautiful imegery phyliss . Love it !*smiles* RON
Peranteau Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 8:00 AM
Beautiful picture dear poet ! I def. enjoyed this write Phyllis ! Have a splendid weekend my friend....much love, james
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June 16, 2012 at 4:54 AM
Love it Phyllis !!! Have a sweet weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise
Loving Iii Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 6:10 PM
that just on the horizon. i see it often.
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