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Earths Beautiful Flow

translucent waters in meandering journey ancient paths taken

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 7/29/2014 6:01:00 PM
James, WOW... talk about beauty in the first degree... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2011 8:51:00 AM
Beautiful haiku James, really love the ancient paths taken.....
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Date: 12/16/2010 11:01:00 AM
I get the feeling you may be what some call an 'old soul'. At least, that's the feel I have been getting from some of your poetry. This is wonderful. Visual and well-written. ps. soup mail to you re thank you
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Date: 12/16/2010 9:24:00 AM
A superbly crafted haiku you have penned here James. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read mine and your always nice comments are deeply appreciated! Hope you have a wonderfully blessed day~Mary
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Date: 12/16/2010 4:36:00 AM
James, another beauty from you and so profound too.. Guess who is on holiday?? Hope your Thursday is a good one ;)
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Date: 12/15/2010 11:05:00 AM
Hello James, Such a mellow and beautiful read....Love it As Always, Shar
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Date: 12/15/2010 6:27:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup James. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
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Date: 12/14/2010 11:34:00 PM
this is beautiful James-- I really like how you connect this to the past-- :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 12/14/2010 7:42:00 PM
All the way down to those beautiful Loch's, James, love this such profoundness. Harry
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Date: 12/14/2010 7:39:00 PM
i really like this! earth is a beautiful place to be, and provides new beauty to witness everyday! i am so very thankful! thanks for providing great poetry to read today! nice work.
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Date: 12/14/2010 5:11:00 PM
Yesssss; this is definately good dear Sir ! Great write Mr. Fraser ! You are the poet for sure ! And I am sorry if I have offended you in any way. much love, james
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:05:00 PM
Good one..Ancient paths taken..Excellent work..Sara
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Date: 12/14/2010 3:55:00 PM
lovely haiku, so peaceful, good luck in the contest James
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Date: 12/14/2010 3:09:00 PM
The streams and rivers have been meandering in these ancient paths for many years, James. Such a vivid and thought-provoking image that recollects the passage of time. Best wishes in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/14/2010 3:03:00 PM
AH nice flow and vision to this... exellent my friend...
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Date: 12/14/2010 2:53:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work tonight. the river has to take the low route via gravity...enjoyed
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Date: 12/14/2010 2:48:00 PM
Lovely write on the flowing water with good images, James
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