Earths Beautiful Flow

translucent waters in meandering journey ancient paths taken
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July 29, 2014 at 6:01 PM
James, WOW... talk about beauty in the first degree... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA
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February 21, 2011 at 2:22 PM
So much to reflect on in this poem. Nice use of imagery. Well done! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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January 7, 2011 at 8:51 AM
Beautiful haiku James, really love the ancient paths taken.....
Radke Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 11:01 AM
I get the feeling you may be what some call an 'old soul'. At least, that's the feel I have been getting from some of your poetry. This is wonderful. Visual and well-written. ps. soup mail to you re thank you
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December 16, 2010 at 9:24 AM
A superbly crafted haiku you have penned here James. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read mine and your always nice comments are deeply appreciated! Hope you have a wonderfully blessed day~Mary
Neels Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 4:36 AM
James, another beauty from you and so profound too.. Guess who is on holiday?? Hope your Thursday is a good one ;)
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December 15, 2010 at 11:05 AM
Hello James, Such a mellow and beautiful read....Love it As Always, Shar
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December 15, 2010 at 6:27 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup James. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
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December 14, 2010 at 11:34 PM
this is beautiful James-- I really like how you connect this to the past-- :) -- nikko :)
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December 14, 2010 at 7:42 PM
All the way down to those beautiful Loch's, James, love this such profoundness. Harry
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December 14, 2010 at 7:39 PM
i really like this! earth is a beautiful place to be, and provides new beauty to witness everyday! i am so very thankful! thanks for providing great poetry to read today! nice work.
Peranteau Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 5:11 PM
Yesssss; this is definately good dear Sir ! Great write Mr. Fraser ! You are the poet for sure ! And I am sorry if I have offended you in any way. much love, james
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December 14, 2010 at 4:05 PM
Good one..Ancient paths taken..Excellent work..Sara
Roberts Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 3:55 PM
lovely haiku, so peaceful, good luck in the contest James
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December 14, 2010 at 3:09 PM
The streams and rivers have been meandering in these ancient paths for many years, James. Such a vivid and thought-provoking image that recollects the passage of time. Best wishes in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
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December 14, 2010 at 3:03 PM
AH nice flow and vision to this... exellent my friend...
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December 14, 2010 at 2:53 PM
Enjoyed reading your work tonight. the river has to take the low route via gravity...enjoyed
Mehta Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Lovely write on the flowing water with good images, James
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