Valsa George Poet Rhyme

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August-28-2025

Two, Seven, Four Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Charles Messina

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Earthquake TSF

shocking
tremors, 
rock earth.
shake land.
plates drift
rocks skid
panic.


seismic
waves beat,
land quakes,
ground breaks
rupture
fissure
havoc.


buildings
crumble
heart pounds
fear rules
body
trembles
turmoil.


rubble 
surrounds
many 
injured
many
are dead
hearts boil.

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Andrea Dietrich September 14, 2025 at 3:04 PM Back with my congrats, dear

Charles Messina September 14, 2025 at 3:22 AM Valsa, you described a devastating earthquake to a T. Well done with this form. Congratulations on your placement in my contest! Thanks for entering :)

Krishnanand Guptar September 14, 2025 at 1:34 AM Congratulations, Valsa, on your win in this contest with a well described poem on earthquake, which must be quaking the heart. Wish you a peaceful Sunday.

Dr. Vandana Sharma September 13, 2025 at 9:45 AM Congratulations on your placement in the contest!!

Jay Narain August 29, 2025 at 11:26 AM nice talke on earthquake. I live on earhtquake zone with many faults. When we get a jolt, we say, here it goes.

sara Etgen-Baker August 28, 2025 at 5:33 PM well done, outstanding contest creation. Best wishes with this entry! hugs, Sara

Andrea Dietrich August 28, 2025 at 3:06 PM Very good job with this fun challenge, Valsa

Kim Rodrigues August 28, 2025 at 10:06 AM Well done!