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Earthquake TSF

shocking
tremors, 
rock earth.
shake land.
plates drift
rocks skid
panic.


seismic
waves beat,
land quakes,
ground breaks
rupture
fissure
havoc.


buildings
crumble
heart pounds
fear rules
body
trembles
turmoil.


rubble 
surrounds
many 
injured
many
are dead
hearts boil.

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/14/2025 3:04:00 PM Back with my congrats, dear Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 9/14/2025 3:22:00 AM Valsa, you described a devastating earthquake to a T. Well done with this form. Congratulations on your placement in my contest! Thanks for entering :) Login to Reply

Krishnanand Guptar Date: 9/14/2025 1:34:00 AM Congratulations, Valsa, on your win in this contest with a well described poem on earthquake, which must be quaking the heart. Wish you a peaceful Sunday. Login to Reply

Dr. Vandana Sharma Date: 9/13/2025 9:45:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in the contest!! Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 8/29/2025 11:26:00 AM nice talke on earthquake. I live on earhtquake zone with many faults. When we get a jolt, we say, here it goes. Login to Reply

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/28/2025 5:33:00 PM well done, outstanding contest creation. Best wishes with this entry! hugs, Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/28/2025 3:06:00 PM Very good job with this fun challenge, Valsa Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/28/2025 10:06:00 AM Well done! Login to Reply