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Earthly Hell

Has it ever rang a bell, That life is a pure hell. The people I thought I trust, Just told me to bite the dust. Love is just a stupid game; All it has brought me is shame. I seem cooler if I lie; Because you think your Mr. Wise Guy. This bullet has your name on in and what not. All I can do is take that gunshot. Just so I don’t seem bigger. I never will pull the trigger. We live in a race of black and while. We all die day and night. Some of us have explored, While others just were adored. Our Earth is hell year-round. No wonder aliens haven’t been found. They are scared of us; Another excuse. So why we try; What’s the use?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/15/2010 4:33:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Crystal. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2010 9:02:00 PM
very direct, loved it, enjoyed our write...P.D.
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