Earth Spins In Orbit

Earth spins in orbit Changing the top of the world Every day renewed. © November 8, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 6:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in S.K.A.T.'s "Top Of The World" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:49:00 AM

DANE, congratualtions on your TOP OF THE WORLD haiku entry, Take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/16/2011 8:44:00 AM

Congrats Dane Ann on HM with this vivid Haiku luv..thankxx for letting me know of your situation of life change.. prayers to u always.. my hand is in a cast from finger surgery right now but typing as best I can to keep spirit up and flowing luv..

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/16/2011 9:53:00 AM

Thank you, Linda-Marie, and feel better soon. I know a real fast 2 finger typer that sits at the computer beside me! The love of my life, my spouse. Happy typing...enjoyed your comment. Big Smiles.

Skat A

Date: 11/16/2011 2:37:00 AM

Dear Dane, ... Thank you for the H.M.. Like others at got the title all wrong.. I really think this was one of my top Haiku's... Sorry about the title, I still think this was a topper... thank you~SKAT

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/16/2011 4:39:00 AM

Thanks for letting me know...and for giving me an HM even though I (Duh...read and forgot) didn't follow directions about the title. I enjoyed writing for your contest. Big Smiles.