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Earth Spins In Orbit

Earth spins in orbit
Changing the top of the world
Every day renewed.

© November 8, 2011
Dane Smith-Johnsen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 18, 2011 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations on your placement in S.K.A.T.'s "Top Of The World" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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November 18, 2011 at 2:49 AM
DANE, congratualtions on your TOP OF THE WORLD haiku entry, Take care,..p.d.
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November 16, 2011 at 8:44 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on HM with this vivid Haiku luv..thankxx for letting me know of your situation of life change.. prayers to u always.. my hand is in a cast from finger surgery right now but typing as best I can to keep spirit up and flowing luv..
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November 16, 2011 at 9:53 AM
Thank you, Linda-Marie, and feel better soon. I know a real fast 2 finger typer that sits at the computer beside me! The love of my life, my spouse. Happy typing...enjoyed your comment. Big Smiles.
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November 16, 2011 at 2:37 AM
Dear Dane, ... Thank you for the H.M.. Like others at got the title all wrong.. I really think this was one of my top Haiku's... Sorry about the title, I still think this was a topper... thank you~SKAT
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November 16, 2011 at 4:39 AM
Thanks for letting me know...and for giving me an HM even though I (Duh...read and forgot) didn't follow directions about the title. I enjoyed writing for your contest. Big Smiles.
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