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Earth Shrugged

Vibrations feral spread across the land Meek upon earth, then approached the elder “We are helpless; please help man understand!” “For he has engaged in widespread plunder Consumed by desire and ruled by instinct Killing, maiming and mining down under” Mother Earth listened, viewing her precinct Thought awhile, then from God took permission Spewing a virus, with message succinct: “Enjoy my gifts, in joyful elation Live in peace or face annihilation“ 04-February-2021 (syllabic Terza Rima)

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Date: 2/4/2021 5:56:00 PM
Excellent poesy, Seeker. Important message here, couched in appealing form. Well done! :) gw
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Date: 2/4/2021 6:13:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Date: 2/4/2021 9:49:00 AM
Yes SO true. When Mother Earth starts reacting, nothing can stop her. God bless ~ Ani
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Date: 2/4/2021 6:12:00 PM
Yes. Tread gently on the earth! Thanks for dropping by, Anitha!
Date: 2/4/2021 2:00:00 AM
and here we are, the killing fields of covid. Great form and message, Seeker.
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Date: 2/4/2021 2:29:00 AM
Thanks, Jenna! For the spiritually curious, this was foretold way back in 2012 in a channelled message from Maha Avatar Babaji
Date: 2/4/2021 12:51:00 AM
Very well composed terza rhyme. I have never tried this form but you did well. ~~
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Date: 2/4/2021 12:53:00 AM
Thanks Victor!

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