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Earth Prayers

Vespers of the falls, Exclaiming the earth’s past pains; Whispers in the mist.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/14/2009 9:46:00 PM
One to slowly ponder here, Raul ... smile ...
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Date: 8/14/2009 5:13:00 PM
A faith-full Haiku, extremely well written>>James
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Date: 8/8/2009 3:36:00 AM
whispers in the mist how ethereal and beautiful I loved this one ... love Jayne x x
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Date: 8/6/2009 12:39:00 PM
Wonderful use of imagery for a creative perspective. Love the last line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep up the good writing!!!! Karen
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Date: 8/6/2009 10:09:00 AM
Another masterful work by you.
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Date: 8/6/2009 9:35:00 AM
Raul, when you get your book of Haiku's written please let me know. I wish to buy one. Grand Haiku as usual. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/6/2009 6:16:00 AM
Serenity speaks in this wistful, soft poem! Nicely done!
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Date: 8/6/2009 3:16:00 AM
i love your prayer-well penned Haiku king--charma
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Date: 8/5/2009 9:39:00 PM
You are a master of the haikus Raul, this is such a compelling piece of elegant art that your have crafted. This goes to my favs!
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Date: 8/5/2009 8:49:00 PM
beautiful poetry.... short and powerful, powerful and short. Enjoy your day.
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