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Earth Prayers

Vespers of the falls,
Exclaiming the earth’s past pains;
Whispers in the mist.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mason Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 9:46 PM
One to slowly ponder here, Raul ... smile ...
Fraser Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 5:13 PM
A faith-full Haiku, extremely well written>>James
Eggins Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 3:36 AM
whispers in the mist how ethereal and beautiful I loved this one ... love Jayne x x
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August 6, 2009 at 12:39 PM
Wonderful use of imagery for a creative perspective. Love the last line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep up the good writing!!!! Karen
Higgins Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 10:09 AM
Another masterful work by you.
Brown Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Raul, when you get your book of Haiku's written please let me know. I wish to buy one. Grand Haiku as usual. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 6:16 AM
Serenity speaks in this wistful, soft poem! Nicely done!
Chircop Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 3:16 AM
i love your prayer-well penned Haiku king--charma
Bird Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 9:39 PM
You are a master of the haikus Raul, this is such a compelling piece of elegant art that your have crafted. This goes to my favs!
Burton Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 8:49 PM
beautiful poetry.... short and powerful, powerful and short. Enjoy your day.
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