Earth Moves

rock jut draped in green magnificent violence still life in motion MagiCicada17

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/25/2019 5:28:00 PM

I love this one,had to fav.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/2/2019 2:43:00 PM

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/22/2019 7:41:00 AM

Such cool imagery, sweet poet! I lean in to listen...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/24/2019 7:12:00 AM

Thank you Lovely! :))) xomo!

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2019 12:16:00 PM

A world which continually evolves and keeps us on our feet! A most expressive haiku with a superb end line. ~ Warm regards // paul

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/22/2019 6:30:00 AM

Thank you Paul! xomo :)

Jeff Connelly

Date: 6/20/2019 9:15:00 AM

Magnificently violent yes it is, but to follow up with that last line; simply brilliant!!! I've been waiting for a read from you Maureen, and the wait was well worth it. Thank you thanks. (just remember that you can keep pushing the envelope but it's still stationary)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/20/2019 2:46:00 PM

Thank you! I'm thrilled you like it. And, lol ;D xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/19/2019 8:42:00 PM

Ooooh! Sharp, sharper, and sharpest. ~ gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/20/2019 6:39:00 AM

Thank you my dear Wolf Man. x