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Over the brazen earth, A breeze wafting gently, Evokes sensual aromatic bursts, Yet earthy by intent. Clean fresh air rejuvenates. World’s blanket of atmosphere, Supplies the essential air, So imperative for living. Elixir of life everlasting, Crystal clear incandescent water, Fish, plants, animals, industry, Survive because of water. Smoke, an acrid smell, Controlled fire is friendly, Cooks, heats, burns fuel, Fire incinerates our rubbish.

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Date: 2/22/2024 4:33:00 AM
Brilliant write so deep and strong! Well delivered. I especially loved “ A breeze wafting gently, Evokes sensual aromatic bursts,“ beautiful wordplay . “ Elixir of life everlasting, Crystal clear incandescent water,“ impeccable! Such a soulful write. Pleasure reading this, congratulations on your well deserved win
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Date: 2/22/2024 5:18:00 AM
Thanks dear Empress, glad you like it, I appreciate your lovely comment. Best wishes Wen.
Date: 2/21/2024 11:10:00 AM
- Same choice...but completely different... enjoy reading your contribution ... lovely written, S.V. :) - hugs
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Date: 2/21/2024 2:40:00 PM
I loved your version. T'was a pleasure to read. Excellent. Thanks for your generous comment on mine. Best wishes Wen
Date: 2/21/2024 4:44:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Very nicely done
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Date: 2/21/2024 2:41:00 PM
Thanks so much Joseph.
Date: 2/20/2024 9:44:00 PM
I really like how you did your 4 by 4. It was a cool contest. Congrats for the win. Also I hope you will do me a favor, Can you tell Valsa for me that Soup won't let me leave her comments. I am not even able to get a soupmail through to get. Let me know, ok? Thanks
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Date: 2/20/2024 10:50:00 PM
Message sent :)
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Date: 2/20/2024 10:06:00 PM
aww thanks so much for your lovely comment.. On my way to message Valsa Cheers Wen
Date: 2/19/2024 10:40:00 AM
Essentials of human life. Noce poem.
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Date: 2/19/2024 3:56:00 PM
You are sweet to comment so often Jay, its appreciated.

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