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Earth Air Water Fire

Over the brazen earth, A breeze wafting gently, Evokes sensual aromatic bursts, Yet earthy by intent. Clean fresh air rejuvenates. World’s blanket of atmosphere, Supplies the essential air, So imperative for living. Elixir of life everlasting, Crystal clear incandescent water, Fish, plants, animals, industry, Survive because of water. Smoke, an acrid smell, Controlled fire is friendly, Cooks, heats, burns fuel, Fire incinerates our rubbish.
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Empress Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 4:33 AM
Brilliant write so deep and strong! Well delivered. I especially loved “ A breeze wafting gently, Evokes sensual aromatic bursts,“ beautiful wordplay . “ Elixir of life everlasting, Crystal clear incandescent water,“ impeccable! Such a soulful write. Pleasure reading this, congratulations on your well deserved win
Volumes Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 5:18 AM
Thanks dear Empress, glad you like it, I appreciate your lovely comment. Best wishes Wen.
Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 11:10 AM
- Same choice...but completely different... enjoy reading your contribution ... lovely written, S.V. :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 2:40 PM
I loved your version. T'was a pleasure to read. Excellent. Thanks for your generous comment on mine. Best wishes Wen
Goldsmith Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 8:53 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What a great picture... Have a blessed day.............
Volumes Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 2:40 PM
Thanks so much sweet Paula You have a great day too.
May Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 4:44 AM
Congrats on your win, Very nicely done
Volumes Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 2:41 PM
Thanks so much Joseph.
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 9:44 PM
I really like how you did your 4 by 4. It was a cool contest. Congrats for the win. Also I hope you will do me a favor, Can you tell Valsa for me that Soup won't let me leave her comments. I am not even able to get a soupmail through to get. Let me know, ok? Thanks
Volumes Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 10:50 PM
Message sent :)
Volumes Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 10:06 PM
aww thanks so much for your lovely comment.. On my way to message Valsa Cheers Wen
Narain Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 10:40 AM
Essentials of human life. Noce poem.
Volumes Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 3:56 PM
You are sweet to comment so often Jay, its appreciated.
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