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Ears Pierced

inside of ears pierced song penetrates dark deeply lighting up canal enhancement of oars gliding through calm waters of Venice

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/27/2024 5:47:00 PM

Would love to visit it- <3

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/24/2024 4:02:00 PM

such a melodious Tanka. Loved the tranquility of the image of oars gliding through calm waters. Perfect visual for me when I'm stressed. Have a delightful evening, hugs, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2024 4:19:00 PM

Thank you, Sara! I enjoyed writing it! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/24/2024 7:11:00 AM

I'm so glad it was tranquil music and not one that literally pierced the ear drums!:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2024 8:08:00 AM

Right?! LOL