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Early To Rise

EARLY TO RISE (COLLABORATION) Early to bed and early to rise, So my mother said, Makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. So, come on, get out of bed. Assumed if it rhymed it must be true, So I rose from my bed full of pep. Every day seemed exciting and new; I walked with a spring in my step. But now I’m getting past my prime, I realize she told me lies. I’ve never been wealthy, I can’t spare a dime And I’m not remotely wise. And as for my health, though not quite dead, I’m permanently ailing. My doctor says I should stay in bed; He fears I may be failing. So ignore advice to get up at dawn; It won’t make you any stronger. Just switch your alarm off, have a good yawn, And lie-in a little bit longer 10th August 2019 For COLLABORATION contest Sponsor Line Gautier

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Date: 8/29/2019 12:27:00 AM
Congratulations, Bryn on your first place win. Good suggestion through a nice verse.
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Date: 8/28/2019 8:25:00 PM
Love it. Congrats on your top win, Bryn.
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Date: 8/28/2019 12:20:00 PM
Thank you Chris. Your comments much appreciated
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Date: 8/28/2019 6:54:00 AM
Very well done. You captured the essence of the inspirational poem and added some fun thoughts and easily relatable experiences to it and I think this was fantastic. Congrats on your win.
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