Early Summer Park

The feel of the place began to exude a sedated flow,
From the walking birds that milled in groups
To the laziness of the water.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 10:43 PM
this is a really cool one. I like that feeling of laziness it evokes!
Paul Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the comment. We all need to relax now and again.
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