Early Spring's Sun

early Spring's sun penetrates bay windows warming kind old souls removing patchwork quilts from their knees

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/19/2024 12:38:00 PM

Beautiful! I can see those “old souls” warming up.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/19/2024 11:48:00 AM

Nothing like a bit of heat to lift your spirits. Hope you're keeping well Gershon. Tom

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/19/2024 5:29:00 AM

beautiful and delicate imagery in this one, Gershon. I liked 'warming kind old souls.' Hoping to be a kind old soul someday (not now, of course...when I'm in my 90s) :-) enjoy your Tuesday, Sara

Michael Tor

Date: 3/18/2024 10:31:00 PM

Love the imagery in this one Gershon. I can picture my grandma and grandfather in this piece of literature of yours...