Early Spring At Last

EARLY SPRING  AT  LAST


Like a surly spoiled child giving up his toy ship,

The dirty snow grudgingly  gives ground,

Is forced  back and releases soiled  grip,

Revealing crocus ghost-shoots pale and round.



Air is mild like a woman’s soft breath

Feeding  life anew to the tree’s bare  skeleton 

Arms,  fresh-wrested from death:

And raising each hard green bud-scion. 



River free at last from immobility:

Giant ice-shards’  gaunt mute motion 
 
In the flowing waters of felicity,

Singing its joyful  way to the  ocean.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is superb,Sydney. time to fave you to my poets!!
Sweetheart Avatar
April 14, 2011 at 7:09 PM
Great imagery Syd ... waiting for full bloom of Spring here to chase away snow mounds still luv..
Devonshire Avatar
April 14, 2011 at 4:00 PM
I love the comparison of the dirty snow to the spoiled child, Syd. Quite an original and imaginative write on the onset of spring! Can see so clearly the river turning from ice to water again. Awesome! Love, carolyn
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