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Early Spring

The first crocus appeared, showing much pluck in spite of the cold, trying her luck. But then the wind hit her and the wind was so bitter that the crocus thought "This just sucks!"

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Date: 4/20/2024 11:38:00 AM
Hello Jim Healy, Winter an d spring always struggles. winter it seems wants to stay longer. they always have a battle. So the3 flowers that pop up early do not have a chance to grow. Yes the weather is unpredictable in NFLD. I agree it is a beautiful place. This will be my fav. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/20/2024 2:49:00 PM
Hello Jim, yes i enjoyed this poem. You are very welcome. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Jim Healey
Date: 4/20/2024 1:27:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene. Glad you like it. Cheers! Jim

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