Early Snow

Broken sunshine through 
silver clouds and fading rain
snow falls suddenly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 5:45 PM
wow, another good one. Oh by the way I forgot to say, don't let my last name deceive you. I am actually a Miller and even Dietrich is not the name of my husband since it is his adopted name. but i think it's a real pretty name and enjoy hearing of your German heritage! andrea
George   Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 6:27 PM
Great Haiku, Gert. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent today. Lainie
Culverhouse Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 4:26 PM
sounds like here, we got rain, then sleet, then rain again. then it turned coooldd!
Guzzi Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 1:45 PM
great one..love up you swooped up the ending! Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 2:30 PM
VERY NICE!! andrea
Kendrick Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 6:09 AM
Must be a beautiful scene but cold. Definitely tells me it is winter in this one. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem about cross the line. I am begining to feel that maybe I am doing too much of this. That is where the poem came from. Keep writing. Sara
Devonshire Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 5:52 AM
There's nothing like waking up in the morning to find the snow falling. Beautiful haiku, Gert! Love, Carolyn
Sheart Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 5:46 AM
Beautiful Haiku Gert! Great visual, love the snow. Sending good thoughts your way from Alaska. Take care, Love Light Patty
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