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Early Snow

Broken sunshine through silver clouds and fading rain snow falls suddenly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/23/2010 5:45:00 PM
wow, another good one. Oh by the way I forgot to say, don't let my last name deceive you. I am actually a Miller and even Dietrich is not the name of my husband since it is his adopted name. but i think it's a real pretty name and enjoy hearing of your German heritage! andrea
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Date: 1/17/2010 6:27:00 PM
Great Haiku, Gert. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent today. Lainie
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Date: 1/17/2010 4:26:00 PM
sounds like here, we got rain, then sleet, then rain again. then it turned coooldd!
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Date: 1/17/2010 1:45:00 PM
great one..love up you swooped up the ending! Light & Love
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Date: 1/15/2010 2:30:00 PM
VERY NICE!! andrea
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Date: 1/15/2010 6:09:00 AM
Must be a beautiful scene but cold. Definitely tells me it is winter in this one. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem about cross the line. I am begining to feel that maybe I am doing too much of this. That is where the poem came from. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 1/15/2010 5:52:00 AM
There's nothing like waking up in the morning to find the snow falling. Beautiful haiku, Gert! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/15/2010 5:46:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku Gert! Great visual, love the snow. Sending good thoughts your way from Alaska. Take care, Love Light Patty
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