Early Season Moth

Early season moth

Born before it’s really Spring

Flying all alone

But time still to feel the sun

If only for one moment
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Arnone Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 10:38 AM
Very good Tanka, Richard. I could feel the warm sun on my wings. ;-)
Jordan Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Thanks, Tom. I appreciate the kind comment and visit.
Shaw Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 12:32 PM
You have captured a very unique moment in nature and penned it for us to enjoy. An excellent tanka, Richard! Hugs, Kimberly
Jordan Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 2:05 PM
Thanks, Kimberly. I need a little more work on that genre, but am encouraged to try.
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