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Early Season Moth

Early season moth Born before it’s really Spring Flying all alone But time still to feel the sun If only for one moment

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/6/2016 10:38:00 AM
Very good Tanka, Richard. I could feel the warm sun on my wings. ;-)
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Date: 10/7/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. I appreciate the kind comment and visit.
Date: 4/3/2015 12:32:00 PM
You have captured a very unique moment in nature and penned it for us to enjoy. An excellent tanka, Richard! Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 4/3/2015 2:05:00 PM
Thanks, Kimberly. I need a little more work on that genre, but am encouraged to try.

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