Early October

summer's sweet fever
    breaks on a cool autumn night~
                morning dew

                18 Oct 2023
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Mendoza Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 12:24 PM
Hmm, I chose this because my tragic car accident was Oct. 11, 1999 so it's quite sometime, it was Fall semester at the College but u said Summer fever, I don't know it's confusing. I invite you to visit my poetrysoup hp and choose a poem some say it's a lesson for him but I say it's good for your soul, thanks~Jac
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 5:03 PM
oh this is so perfect for the time of year, i like the transition from summer to autumn! hugs jan xx
Empress Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 2:51 AM
Absolutely stunning and seamless, i love “ summers sweet fever” creative! Well deserved win. Congratulations
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 10:07 AM
SO beautiul, Emile. Congrats
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