Early New Years

Dark hair blowing
In the winds of hot desire
And dark eyes glowing
Like two diamonds filled with fire.
         Dancing to the rhythms;
         Well into the night;
         Nothing taken most was given
         Rocking on till all’s right
Was it accordance?
Or maybe a prelude who’s to know;
But it was certainly fully loaded;
Dangerously speedy but comfortably slow.
           Cocktails at the penthouse;
           Lights down low
           Cat tails swishing
           Nothing left to show
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Loveless Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 4:47 PM
A late a sultry night...i like the sound. especially love the line "in the winds of got desire...dark eyes glowing like two diamonds filled with fire"
Palli Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 3:04 AM
Well done!
Williams Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 10:27 AM
Leonard well done I like it..David
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