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Early Morning Walk

The door opens like a gateway to nirvana ravaging the dark with the outside light Sun glaring down like a stern parent disapproving the showering of such grace on undeserving kids Chirping birds barking dogs feral cats on the prowl All a symphony of morning glory on the summer day from heaven Trekking along winding roads as nature opens up before us Our bodies seek to unlock from restrictive digital positions No technology here microchips cannot replace the unrivaled pleasure that nature offers the body, spirit and soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/13/2021 8:33:00 PM
A pleasure to find your awesome poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, David ~
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David Mayerhoff
Date: 7/2/2023 11:33:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line, for the note and good wishes- I dont check this website that often but still can't understand why I am first seeing some messages now after all this time without any notification- thanks again- David
Date: 10/26/2020 1:51:00 PM
Enjoyed reading about your morning walk. Mornings offer a quiet time because most sleep in if possible. It is amazing what we can see and hear when out and looking and listening just about daylight. Sara
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David Mayerhoff
Date: 10/26/2020 9:03:00 PM
Indeed! Thank you very much Sara for your comments
Date: 2/16/2018 8:09:00 AM
Beautiful poem, David. Strong clear message. Well done.
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David Mayerhoff
Date: 2/16/2018 2:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line
Date: 7/9/2017 1:12:00 PM
Couldn't agree more, David! I feel the joy in this delightful poem!
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David Mayerhoff
Date: 7/9/2017 2:06:00 PM
Thank you very much James

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