Early Morning Kindness Ink

On an early misty winter morning,                                                                                                                                       I saw a shoeless man crossing the street                                                                                                                      Giving my shoes to him was a real treat                                                                                                                           Then I was shoeless but much more loving

020420PoSpCtest, Kind Ink, Charles Messina, 3P                                                                                                                    4 Lines, Rhyme Pattern (ABBA), 10 syllables per line
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Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 1:41 PM
back again to say congrats for your win, Curtis.
Messina Avatar
April 17, 2020 at 7:52 PM
Very nice, Curtis. Great message with rhyme and meter too boot. Congratulations on your placement. Stay safe and well my friend. Charlie
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2020 at 8:36 PM
very sweet, curtis!
Gauthier Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 6:49 PM
Thoroughly enjoyed your poem, Curtis.
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