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Early Morning Haiku

Majestic morning Day breaks flashing amber eyes Sunshine on her lips

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Carol Fillmore

Date: 1/17/2011 6:19:00 PM

Eiken, this has gorgeous imagery, the sunshine on her lips is wonderful. Well done. Thanks so much for your congrats for "Avatar", much appreciated! Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/17/2011 12:03:00 PM

To wake up and see the sunlight on your loved one's lips is such a memorable moment, Eiken. Beautiful descriptive haiku. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/13/2011 9:32:00 AM

lovely write, enjoyed your early morning haiku,..p.d.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/13/2011 9:08:00 AM

Hello Eiken, Ahhhh you are just so sweet, I love the way you think. This is precious! As Always, Shar

Stephen Parker

Date: 1/13/2011 7:12:00 AM

You wrote a haiku on sunrise, and I wrote a complimentary one on sunset (Satiating Reams). I think we have the day covered! Seriously, enjoyed your artistic description of the dawning sun!

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/13/2011 6:52:00 AM

Hi Sunset on Tramore. I love it. Eamon

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/13/2011 5:07:00 AM

Pleasing haiku, perhaps lacking profundity