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Early Morning Haiku

Majestic morning

Day breaks flashing amber eyes

Sunshine on her lips

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Carol Fillmore

January 17, 2011 at 6:19 PM

Eiken, this has gorgeous imagery, the sunshine on her lips is wonderful. Well done. Thanks so much for your congrats for "Avatar", much appreciated! Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

January 17, 2011 at 12:03 PM

To wake up and see the sunlight on your loved one's lips is such a memorable moment, Eiken. Beautiful descriptive haiku. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

January 13, 2011 at 9:32 AM

lovely write, enjoyed your early morning haiku,..p.d.

Sharon Ruebel

January 13, 2011 at 9:08 AM

Hello Eiken, Ahhhh you are just so sweet, I love the way you think. This is precious! As Always, Shar

Stephen Parker

January 13, 2011 at 7:12 AM

You wrote a haiku on sunrise, and I wrote a complimentary one on sunset (Satiating Reams). I think we have the day covered! Seriously, enjoyed your artistic description of the dawning sun!