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Early Morning

EARLY MORNING Early morning. Darkened skies. All alone with the tears I cry. I am stuck in this awful mode feeling alone with the mother lode. How can it be? Why can’t I see the wasteland that is me? I try to write but the words they run, they run into the morning sun. Free me Muse from icy bonds. Free me Muse to feel the sun. I lock myself behind the door looking for the evermore. Write hand Write! Paint arm Paint! Spill the stain and work the ink. Troubled soul that I am make me humble before the stand. Easel, my easel rigid in form hold my victim while I learn. Mighty pen set me free. Mighty pen release me. Finally the work is done, this solemn work just begun, this early morning poem. Another battle that I’ve won. Another poem for my chums.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/12/2014 9:42:00 PM
Bryan ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA
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Date: 4/7/2014 5:26:00 AM
A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week , bryan
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Date: 3/29/2014 4:18:00 PM
Hi,Bryan.. So well written, it is sweet and refreshing .and brings out the person in you..the childish one I,suppose.. . :) Joye
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Date: 3/29/2014 4:12:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Bryan :) - I choose your first very good written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/29/2014 1:36:00 PM
Hi Bryan, I can relate to this poem... everyday I wake up battling myself. It's a nice day, when I win... I have a poem called "White Picket Fence".. If I could I would tag my poem with this one... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/29/2014 11:46:00 AM
I like how you conquer the moment, then write about it. Bryan, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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