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early darkness

early darkness- a mad man talking to a billboard girl ================

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 1/4/2014 7:22:00 PM
Hello Kash, I could not leave without saying goodbye.. A Libra-Mate just like me October 7th.... You are one of my favorite poets, your pen is tender and amazing. I thank you for always being so kind.... ha ha about that mad man... Happy 2014... LINDA
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Date: 12/7/2013 8:04:00 PM
HI, Kash, still love this one!! thanks for stopping by tonight, my friend. It's snowing like crazy here again.
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Date: 11/16/2013 4:34:00 AM
Kash....perfectly allowing the reader to soar with imagination! Epitome of haiku! Nice! Jimbo
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Date: 11/15/2013 6:34:00 AM
hahaha.. mad and drunk, i suppose :)
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Date: 11/10/2013 5:50:00 PM
ahhh great innovative way to recall fall! its a fine verse. Light & Love
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Date: 11/10/2013 1:38:00 PM
lol, love this, Kash
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Date: 11/10/2013 9:22:00 AM
a question for you at soupmail.
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Date: 11/9/2013 9:57:00 AM
You write so expertly with your Haiku my friend! I am always so very impressed with your skill and wondrous enlightenment you bring with your poetry Kashi! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this morning! What a masterful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/9/2013 12:47:00 AM
well done. I wish I could come up with so many haiku as you do, Kash.
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Date: 11/8/2013 5:54:00 PM
descriptive in every sense of the word and with a surprise that wows me, kashi.. go for it!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/8/2013 12:33:00 PM still blow me away with your true to life haikus! I can see this one in my mind's eye.....the sad reality of someone's tormented world. Well done!! (so nice to see you are back, Kash!)
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Date: 11/8/2013 11:45:00 AM
- Competent done,Kash ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2013 9:59:00 AM
ha! such a great urban image!
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Date: 11/8/2013 9:48:00 AM
I really enjoyed this post kash..I can picture it : )
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