Early Bird's New Motto

Since I was a baby, I had always heard
That the one who gets the worm is the early bird.

Finally the time had come to test my wings, and so
I went out before I even heard the rooster crow.

I was very sneaky; with my siblings still asleep,
Quietly I flew away, making not a peep.

Under trees and bushes, hopping all around,
I searched hard, yet there wasn’t one worm to be found!

I felt pretty stupid when my siblings turned up late.
Up before the dawn, and I didn’t even rate!

Suddenly the sky got dark; rain came pouring down.
Worms appeared as if they now were sprouting from the ground.

Worms aplenty; worms to last my family for the week.
Busily I pecked at them with my little beak.

Now my motto is “To catch some worms, wait for the rain.”
My siblings too agree, for early rising is a pain!


Written 7/22/14 for Carol Eastman's Animals Alive Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Babcock Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 4:47 PM
This is such a cute little poem and am sure your grand kids would enjoy it. love phyl
Gasun Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 12:41 PM
:))) A very delightful poem to read this is my very dear friend Andrea. Super like! This was my motto before, but now, most of the time i prefer to stay late cozily in bed :)). Thank u so much for sharing! And, i can see from comments below that it won! Big congrats my dear friend! Big hugs! I'll b back to read more soon! love lots, Leonora
Reese Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:03 PM
Very nicely done and very true, excellent rhyme and meter . Congrats on your win.
A   Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 12:58 PM
Andrea, a xool win..., Congratulations, on your awesome win.... Love Linda
Hamilton Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 1:51 PM
brilliant pen Andrea very pleased to see it win congrats hugs PS did you know that blackbirds and thrushes dance on the ground to bring out the worms? fooling them into thinking it is raining
Nance Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 11:58 AM
Grats on first place! a charming story with a great motto!
Devonshire Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 11:02 AM
Indeed, sleep in and wait for the rain ;D. Very cute, Andrea. Congrats! Love, carolyn
Lamoureux Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 8:26 AM
It appears I am late to congratulate you. I would have come earlier but I was afraid of getting worms. This was fun, congratulations Andrea.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 6:56 AM
Early rising really is painful ,, who doesn't remember early school timing n hateful risings ,, congrats on top winning awesome write Andrea!
Sirak Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 6:00 AM
Love it! Very clever. Congrats on your win.
De La Luna Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 2:19 AM
i am inclined to have this as my new motto, too! Just because you penned it so excellently, Andrea!! :) Congratulations!
Chutani Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 2:03 AM
a clever move to wait for the rain and congrats for top win, Andrea. Mohan
Song Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 12:12 AM
bwa ha ha ha! A great twist on an oldie! Wow! Jack pot!
Walker  Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 9:11 PM
Nice placement Andrea... Congratulations on a win done well... Verlena
Mehta Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 8:27 PM
Interesting motto wins the first place, congrats, Andrea
Smith Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 7:55 PM
Congrats on top win, girlfriend!!.... Hugs... Arlene
Gorelick Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 5:15 PM
Haha, so cute...congrats. BG
Callus Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 5:10 PM
Congratulations on your top podium finish, Andrea! enjoyed this witty write; at least we did not have to 'worm' the secret out of you....you shared this out of the kindness of your heart:) // paul
Beck Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 4:12 PM
good work Andy.....i said it was good a couple days ago....and I was right !!!
Enriquez Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 5:53 AM
Dear Andrea: Very nice write. Please check my poem titled "Jigsaw Puzzle" which is for you. Enjoy! Leon
Lindley Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 10:48 PM
This write brought a smile to my face ! I am with you on the rising early thing. I prefer that extra two hours sleep. A great write my friend!! Your RHYMING was excellent and the flow very smooth!! BBBravooooooooo!!!!
Anish Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 5:03 PM
Clever work here! Peace & love Matthew Anish
Lamoureux Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 10:47 AM
Ha ha, this is so sweet. I'm glad you didn't go hungry. I posted my wedding poem.
Nehls Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 3:11 AM
Early isn't always smart. Reminds me of the Richard Bach book Jonathan Livingston Seagull. So much to learn out there in the late morning rain. I'll pass on the good news. Very well written, Andrea, and fun to read..... Robert.
Lawless Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 7:39 PM
"the early bird gets the worm...YUCK! I'm with you sleep late go to brunch. Good luck in the contest.
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