Early Bird

Pecked my bedroom window
on the other side was another bird
but it was itself it wanted to bite
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Christodoulou Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 9:54 AM
Really interesting use of imagery and allegory, Solomon! Great job.
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