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Eap Carrier Pilot.

eap- One navy pilot sweating out the flag, as the orange ignites, searing metals shine, and the jolt aloft, with an fermine whine, then the falcons queue, then plunge in line, to the scarlet blooms I can claim as mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/15/2010 12:17:00 AM
Especially like L5 Gerard.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 1/14/2010 2:44:00 PM
Hi Gerard, you have soupmail. Lainie
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Date: 1/14/2010 10:55:00 AM
This is an interesting eap. This have been so interesting on some many topics and from so many points of view. Sara
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Date: 1/14/2010 9:04:00 AM
Dear Keogh, This is heart-wrenching. You paint the scene vividly - tears are falling. Lainie
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Date: 1/14/2010 5:38:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your ~~Magnificent~~ poetry today Gerard. Always a pleasure to read when you post. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2010 12:08:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest,Gerard Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/13/2010 7:24:00 PM
Incredible entry for the contest, Gerard! You packed a lot of punch into this. I think there is a big win in your future. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/13/2010 4:48:00 PM
Wow...this is is powerful, so well done! So much said in such short verse. ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/13/2010 4:37:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery to convey your thoughts. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/13/2010 4:32:00 PM
Gerard so emotionally impacting this is. Very descriptive, good write.My heart really aches for the pilot as my thoughts turn to those who are serving our country. Thanks for sharing, Love Light Patty
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