Eagles

Elevated domains Ensure their advantage Emperors of the sky Extremely keen eyesight Enhance their hunting skills Extra sharp talons kill Each hapless prey they find ----- 9/18/16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2016 8:03:00 PM

Congratulations, Joseph. It did super well in the contest.

Francis J Grasso

Date: 9/23/2016 8:13:00 AM

Well done! Congratulations, Joseph! ...Fran

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/23/2016 5:16:00 AM

So well described in few words. You met the challenge with so much skill. Enjoyed it. Congrats. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/22/2016 2:43:00 PM

Your descriptive and informative Pleiades is a delight to read, Joseph. Congratulations on such a fine high flying win! Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 9/22/2016 12:53:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/22/2016 12:20:00 PM

- I think it's a nice thing to do, to congratulate all one by one - in the contest I participate in - As a little "thank you for the match" regards ..... - Some I have read before and others not - It will always take some time, a long list of winners - But for me it is common courtesy and a pleasure to congratulate you Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 9/22/2016 9:04:00 AM

Wow,what a way to describe eagles!Congrats Joseph!

Lu Loo

Date: 9/22/2016 8:43:00 AM

Eagles are my fave animal! so I really love this one :) congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/22/2016 8:31:00 AM

Written with eagle-eyed precision.

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

Date: 9/21/2016 11:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement Joseph - well deserved - At least they kill for the need of food Regards, Mark

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/21/2016 10:44:00 PM

Emperors of the sky indeed - what a great image in your wonderful portrayal of eagles. Congrats, Joseph. Agnes

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/21/2016 6:22:00 PM

Back to congratulate you, Joseph, on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/21/2016 5:12:00 PM

Wonderful range of description of the eagle in your fine poem, Joseph. Congrats on your win :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/21/2016 5:09:00 PM

Joseph, a wonderful portrayal of eagles in this short form! I love the line, "emperors of the sky"! Congrats on your 2nd place win. Blessings!

Joseph May
Date: 9/22/2016 3:48:00 AM

Thank you for my placement Kim

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/19/2016 3:45:00 PM

A great Pleiades in "E" you have written, Joseph. You have offered so much information in so few words. Your poem should do very well in the contest! Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2016 5:56:00 PM

Very nice one on EAgles. LIke I told Connie, I gotta get working on this one REALLY fast.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2016 2:43:00 PM

- Very well done, Joseph - I wish you luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/18/2016 12:01:00 PM

I'd also thought of writing about eagles!!! but couldn't think of the right words - I couldn't have topped this Joseph! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx