Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

Eager For More

by Michael J Falotico

                                                   sloppy wet kisses..
                                             they don't dry only sink in..
                                                  and eager for more..
  

       whispered sweet nothings..                                     seeing in the dark..
         echo in my soul in tune..                                   without a light or a map..
            sweet lasting music..                                      by scent and touch found..

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 16, 2011 at 10:48 AM if u read my Distant Desires ..it is a reflection of u .. Michael... let me know what u think when u have time to concentrate on the lines luv..thankxxx... J.G. to W.K....

Andrea Dietrich May 30, 2011 at 12:13 AM Romantic set of senryu. I much enjoyed!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 29, 2011 at 12:35 PM super awesome Michael.. luv the not needing a light or map but led by scent and touch.. oh wow.. eager for more for sure luv.. another amazing episode in luv.. your Jersey Girl is now in same vein...eager for more .. my W.K...luv..

Wilma Neels May 29, 2011 at 12:01 PM Eager for more, now I am wondering what I am missing out on lol, jk Michael, lovely passionate series :) love Wilma

De R May 29, 2011 at 7:08 AM Much passion in this write, Michael. Well done! Emilia

Anthony Nutter May 29, 2011 at 7:06 AM Well written and yes i am still eager for more. http://anthonynutter.weebly.com/

Dawn Mclaughlin May 29, 2011 at 6:52 AM I love a passion in kissing... Great Pen Smiles :@) Michael J. Falotico May 29, 2011 at 7:02 AM So do I my dear.... it opens the heart for great inspirations.....Thank your smiles...always Michael