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Eager Beavers

Red apples sway in 
the breeze, beavers underneath wait
for abandoned treats


9/3/11

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2012 6:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2012 6:37:00 AM

Creative winning work..Congrats..Sara

Joseph May

Date: 11/21/2012 6:08:00 AM

a belated congrats on your win Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2012 9:47:00 PM

WAY to GO, Susan, It's great to see you on this list and I got to be here too!!! Congrats my friend. It's so fun to dig up these old haiku, don't you think?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/19/2012 2:41:00 PM

Susan:-) congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD

Len Gasun

Date: 11/19/2012 10:00:00 AM

Many congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Susan! love and hugs, Leonora

Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/19/2012 9:21:00 AM

Very cool haiku, Susan...congrats on your win - Tim

Gail Debole

Date: 11/19/2012 5:47:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN! Love the play on words.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2012 1:26:00 AM

CONGRATS SUSAN ON A MIGHTY POWERFUL WRITE OF VIVID IMAGERY LUV .. AN AMAZING HAIKU TREAT ..

Nathan D.

Date: 11/18/2012 9:37:00 PM

good haiku' Nate

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/22/2011 11:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Sidney's "Any New or old haiku Will do" contest Susan. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 11/21/2011 9:41:00 AM

Lovely Susan, a wonderful view. Congrats on a worthy poem win. Agape, Moses

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/20/2011 2:42:00 AM

congrats on your win x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2011 8:23:00 AM

Congrats on your win in this contest of Irma/SKAT which turned into one by Sydney! And the mystery continues. . .

Skat A

Date: 11/19/2011 12:05:00 AM

S.B, Congrats in my contest~SID

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 8:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance La France's "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/5/2011 12:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" poetry contest sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2011 8:41:00 PM

apples and beavers, huh? I like how you melded them and put that clever catch phrase as your title! Cute as can be,Susan. COngrats on the winners' circle.