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Eager Beavers

Red apples sway in 
the breeze, beavers underneath wait
for abandoned treats


9/3/11

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Carol Sunshine Brown

November 30, 2012 at 6:34 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

November 21, 2012 at 6:37 AM

Creative winning work..Congrats..Sara

Joseph May

November 21, 2012 at 6:08 AM

a belated congrats on your win Susan

Andrea Dietrich

November 19, 2012 at 9:47 PM

WAY to GO, Susan, It's great to see you on this list and I got to be here too!!! Congrats my friend. It's so fun to dig up these old haiku, don't you think?

Poet Destroyer A

November 19, 2012 at 2:41 PM

Susan:-) congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD

Len Gasun

November 19, 2012 at 10:00 AM

Many congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Susan! love and hugs, Leonora

Tim Ryerson

November 19, 2012 at 9:21 AM

Very cool haiku, Susan...congrats on your win - Tim

Gail Debole

November 19, 2012 at 5:47 AM

CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN! Love the play on words.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 19, 2012 at 1:26 AM

CONGRATS SUSAN ON A MIGHTY POWERFUL WRITE OF VIVID IMAGERY LUV .. AN AMAZING HAIKU TREAT ..

Nathan D.

November 18, 2012 at 9:37 PM

good haiku' Nate

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 22, 2011 at 11:45 AM

Congratulations on your win in Sidney's "Any New or old haiku Will do" contest Susan. Love, Carol

John Freeman

November 21, 2011 at 9:41 AM

Lovely Susan, a wonderful view. Congrats on a worthy poem win. Agape, Moses

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

November 20, 2011 at 2:42 AM

congrats on your win x

Andrea Dietrich

November 19, 2011 at 8:23 AM

Congrats on your win in this contest of Irma/SKAT which turned into one by Sydney! And the mystery continues. . .

Skat A

November 19, 2011 at 12:05 AM

S.B, Congrats in my contest~SID

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 6, 2011 at 8:53 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance La France's "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Caryl Ramsdale

September 5, 2011 at 12:24 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" poetry contest sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~.

Andrea Dietrich

September 4, 2011 at 8:41 PM

apples and beavers, huh? I like how you melded them and put that clever catch phrase as your title! Cute as can be,Susan. COngrats on the winners' circle.