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Each Passing Cloud

When darkness blocks out the sun, shadows move over the starry sky. They will not leave you tense or spun, Nothing above a fleeting cloud sigh. Do not let them ruin your halcyon day, with what they do and what they say. That was futile and would never arise, Just rising fogs to wipe tears from eyes. And if a severe blow were to be sent, Don't trust this as the final content. You'll learn once you've hiked the hill, None to fret over; it's a cloud in a drill. I glide on memories above each cloud, Scarlet dusk is chased by a slit of light. I drew your image with a bright mound, Until the gilded sky is bathed in delight.
1st place contest winner Written: March 05, 2023 Each passing cloud Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul
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Agustin Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 8:12 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting from the start till the end. God bless you.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend.........................
McBride  Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 11:42 AM
Great poem, so much knowledge and wisdom in this, love it, you make writing poems look so easy, very gifted you are
George Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 5:03 AM
A beautiful poem emanating a lot of positive vibes . We have to believe that every unforseen and sad incident in life shall pass away like the moving clouds. A beautiful poem with a great message. All the Best.
Daniel Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 1:56 AM
Beautiful poem, Sotto, with a bit of advice:)
Edmonds  Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 1:51 AM
Lovely poetry Sotto, verse three could have been written for me, you know the reason why…. Best wishes, Belle
Pandit Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 12:49 PM
Great imagery throughout. This one stands out for its message. Best to you, Lasaad.
Lawrence Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 8:54 AM
Just beautiful dear Sotto ! Amazing imagery woven with emotions . I love the fleeting cloud sigh ! Wonderful poem . Blessings to you, Susan :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 8:21 AM
Hello Sotto, A beautiful poem with beautiful words. It will be my fav. I like the frist verse, I like the whole poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 8:01 AM
Such imagery deserves to be read thoroughly.
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