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Each Drop a Heaven-Given Gift

When the loud thunder died, clouds open a smile with sunshine. Raindrops danced upon blush of scarlet petals, cleansing the warm earth. Sparrows chirped an explicit scene engaging melody. 4/27/2018
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Thomas Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 11:18 PM
What a beautiful scene you've spun Eve!
Sietesantos Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 1:43 PM
The heavens declare the glory of God; and the sky above proclaims His handiwork. Nature is a reflection of God's greatness and this Sijo paints a wonderful picture of this greatness which flows from your artistic paint brush! Beautiful, Eve! Hugs. Pandita
Krutsinger Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 6:59 PM
I love your imagery. blush of scarlet petals. Yes, not fully red, just a blush. The raindrops cleansed the warm earth. Exactly; you are a wonderful poet, my good woman.
Faulkner Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Wow the first line just grabbed me - it is true in life we all need both rain and sun -
Murray Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 3:28 AM
Singing in the rain....how lovely Eve.
Devonshire Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 2:40 PM
How beautifully your words flow to create this image of cheerful birds enjoying the rain! Lovely, Eve. Hugs, Carolyn
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