David William Breidenthal Poet Acrostic

E - Seventh Part of Expense Series - the Non-Messed Up Version

End this madness inside of my cranium and numb the pain that’s making me 
feel this sensation, as if I was drunk off of rum…I’m not a drunkard that’s 
dumb and that’s a fact that has made a big impact in my life…especially my 
brother’s life to be exact!! Do you have any clue what I’ve been through? Do 
you have any brain cells in your empty brain? Are you damaged by your 
suicidal depression? Anxiety took a toll on you – you’re in its session…it’s 
controlling you like a puppet, doing whatever the puppet master tells it to do! 
You demand attention immediately without further ado…pay off your expense 
of your emotional suspense! Dispense and you shall receive no more expense! 
You are fenced in by the absence of hope and the approval of avarice appeal! 
Ignorant to the time, drifting away from your grasp! You hold your breath and 
you gasp! At last, you understand how important it is to immediately dispose 
of your expense! Just reap what you sow and pay up for your sins! The 
consequences lay in someone else’s hands and the two grand lands split! You 
are way, way more worthy of praise than being in chains in this pitiful pit of 
yours! All because you didn’t pay up your exceptional amount of expense! I’m 
going to drop off reality for the time being until the end! Deplorable Reality’s 
strategic tragedy stings like billion’s of buzzin’ busy bees, swarming around 
me like my crowd of fans, family and friends – what’s the expense of fame? 
Will I be feeling this shame with a grand name? Will it be astonishing beyond 
say or just another bill to pay? Ignorance is bliss they say…I’ll type no more of 
this verse today…Or I’ll pay my expense of writing too much! At least I give 
my poems a great punch of passion, inspiration, and it’s moving, even with 
the slightest touch!!!!

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Sylvester Wright August 21, 2014 at 12:59 AM This is a great idea of a piece a part of it seemed like it may be an in completed thought which still works in the piece. You have a strong writing style though it's to the point you still have a lot of imagery and it pulled me in great job. I can't wait to read more.

Tim Smith August 16, 2014 at 6:01 PM Is this just a format change...I do remember commenting...very well done...You might be interested in a poem called Suicidal Prevention by Casarah Nance.....Tim