E Prison

On the train, heads down
     On the street, heads down
In the store, heads down
     At the gym, heads down
Mobile devices
     The new human vices
Not newly arisen
     But now an E PRISON

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/11/2017 3:25:00 PM

Oh.... so true. Well said my friend. Have a nice day my friend. xxxx-oooo.

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/11/2017 4:04:00 PM

you nae well, Darlene !!!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/30/2017 11:12:00 AM

Powerfully penned Mike, and if they use them when driving they may end up in prison and that could cure the need for their hand held addiction. I have a basic phone for text and calls I need nothing more and rarely use it:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/30/2017 11:28:00 AM

Thanks Jan, I admit that I use mine more that that but absolutely not in car and not when with people, call me old fashioned!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/30/2017 10:26:00 AM

Good point in this one Mike! So true! I like how it was years ago ..lol :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/30/2017 11:28:00 AM

Thanks Heidi, xxxooo