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I do regret having our times before as not well spent I love you for every thing that you are and for every place that we have been I open my heart and leave it unguarded to you, waiting as patiently as one in love can I wanted you to see what I have become I wanted to lock hearts with you somewhere out in the open As two people fighting for each others love each grasping to win I'm a little lost in your love and all these people do make it a sin I want to share a phrase of love, It is- I will promise to always give in Your my husband I shouldn't have to break you And that is my biggest sin, in one way or another I should learn to give Learn to give, the feelings,the understandings learn to add lib But today I guess I'll just sit here hoping That our love will carry you here Tomorrow may bring every emotion I have to give And today I decided that there is nothing to forgive

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Date: 1/18/2015 8:42:00 AM
On reading this poem I feel as if I'm intruding; my place is on the verge, listening to your heartfelt words, tempted to intervene and yet convincing myself that I shouldn't. Is a lot expected from us in love? Can we deliver? Are we expected to please, even if nothing is returned? Should we have to chose between rebellion and submission? // paul
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Date: 1/19/2015 11:24:00 PM
thanks Paul I was studing continental plates and earthquakes, love is what you make of it I guess. You read my poem well, even with the typos.. I guess if a love wants- it pursues even if just for a tempory fix for the emotions. I read some of your poem I like your styles and you subject matter, thanks again Ruth

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