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Dying Sun

DYING SUN How does it matter I remember or forget the nights or lights that stand still in the dense fog nothing visible nor audible the thundering planes touch the ground: it’s all game of guess and vague everyone everything even the tick of the clock this freezing hour redolent of crumbling echoes I can’t divine vision or loom up certainty to mock follies of dying sun

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 3:40:00 PM

Singh, hope you're being active as said below. :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/9/2014 12:05:00 AM

Hello Singh, Congratulation, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2014 8:22:00 PM

Singh,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Singh Ram Krishna
Date: 7/8/2014 1:33:00 AM

Thanks SKAT for stopping by me poem. It's nice to interact with good poets on the Poetry Soup. I wrote about myself elsewhere on this site. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_forum/topic2919-rksingh-the-poet-an-introduction.aspx I value your support. R K

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/7/2014 1:02:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Singh. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Singh Ram Krishna
Date: 7/8/2014 1:35:00 AM

Sure Faye. I may not be very regular, but I value poets reading each other. R K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/3/2014 11:19:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Singh :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. -// Anne-Lise :)

Singh Ram Krishna
Date: 7/4/2014 1:30:00 AM

Thanks Anne.PoetrySoup appears to be a very active forum of many good poets. I too feel very glad to join the community and look forward to interacting with as many as possible.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2014 11:10:00 AM

Singh,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Singh Ram Krishna
Date: 7/4/2014 1:32:00 AM

Thanks Linda. I too will try to be an active member.