Dying Sun

DYING SUN

How does it matter
I remember or forget
the nights or lights
that stand still 

in the dense fog
nothing visible
nor audible

the thundering
planes
touch the ground:

it’s all game
of guess and vague
everyone

everything
even the tick
of the clock

this freezing hour
redolent of 
crumbling echoes

I can’t divine
vision
or loom up certainty
to mock follies
of dying sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 23, 2014 at 3:40 PM
Singh, hope you're being active as said below. :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
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July 9, 2014 at 12:05 AM
Hello Singh, Congratulation, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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July 7, 2014 at 8:22 PM
Singh,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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July 8, 2014 at 1:33 AM
Thanks SKAT for stopping by me poem. It's nice to interact with good poets on the Poetry Soup. I wrote about myself elsewhere on this site. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_forum/topic2919-rksingh-the-poet-an-introduction.aspx I value your support. R K
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July 7, 2014 at 1:02 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Singh. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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July 8, 2014 at 1:35 AM
Sure Faye. I may not be very regular, but I value poets reading each other. R K
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July 3, 2014 at 11:19 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Singh :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. -// Anne-Lise :)
Singh Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 1:30 AM
Thanks Anne.PoetrySoup appears to be a very active forum of many good poets. I too feel very glad to join the community and look forward to interacting with as many as possible.
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July 3, 2014 at 11:10 AM
Singh,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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July 4, 2014 at 1:32 AM
Thanks Linda. I too will try to be an active member.
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