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Dying Love

Thrashing waves pounding against the rocks, the sound of distant seaguls screaching from afar, all seem to know the time is near Distantly the amber glow of a lonely lighthouse seems to be fading further and further out of sight, shadows now make it only visable Fading in and out, I can still feel the numbness which has actually become my only reprive from reality Ever so close now, my love, time is no longer a commodity nor is it even an equation Smoky spaces seem to be more present than the air inwich I breath Even after the seagulls no longer cry, the lighthouse loses its shadow, after the doves now replace the darkness, will I Ever stop loving you.........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/19/2008 8:51:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Please continue with your writing and share it with the world. Write from your heart and you will go far. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2008 5:26:00 PM
Hi Bonnie, I just thought you would like to know that there is a spell check feature to use when you initially post your poem. Since you are so new here, I thought you may not have noticed it. It helps me when I just want to make sure. Then I've been known to forget to use it too. Happy writing! Karen
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Date: 11/9/2008 4:43:00 PM
The imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way in this poem. I especially like the first stanza--it gets the piece off in strong style. You may want to change Dyiing to Dying in the title. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Glad to have your with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/7/2008 11:10:00 PM
This is great Bonnie the association of how lyour feeling with the lighthouse the air and the sea. Very well done. Welcome to Poetry soup. Michael Torres
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Date: 11/7/2008 10:20:00 PM
it's good to know that I'm not the only one who feels this way. thank you for this.
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