Dying Inside Change

Our dying adolescence  
looking for answers
To revive our souls into adulthood

When the days transform into years
small ripples change into whirlpools
To resolve our inconsistencies

Yet some can't merge the two reality's
our childhood with our adulthood
and become lost in life

They become lost to spiritual treasures
settling for silence than absolution
That would keep their world turning

Learning from inadequacy 
from others instead of from within
Dictated by everyone's cascading decisions
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 4:44 AM
Very intellectual work. Sara
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