Dying Heart

Stabbed in the heart, I’m starting to bleed
I’m becoming cold as the touch of death
Yet I don’t want to say goodbye

Painful word, insane cry, sweet goodbye
Pain pounds on me as I bleed
Thumping me until I reach death

Life is being drained by the angel of death
Forcing me to say goodbye
Suffering the more I bleed

Yet even as I bleed to death I refuse to tell you goodbye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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March 10, 2013 at 9:34 PM
HI JULIE, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA
Williams Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 7:35 AM
Julie congrats on your win and I am glad it is not goodbye...David
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 12:06 AM
This one was quite moving. Congrats for your win, Julie.
Jones Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 12:49 PM
This is how I feel when I get my heart broken.... very powerful poem
Liwayway Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 9:15 AM
awesome new form friend Julie. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Maria
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