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Dying Heart

Stabbed in the heart, I’m starting to bleed I’m becoming cold as the touch of death Yet I don’t want to say goodbye Painful word, insane cry, sweet goodbye Pain pounds on me as I bleed Thumping me until I reach death Life is being drained by the angel of death Forcing me to say goodbye Suffering the more I bleed Yet even as I bleed to death I refuse to tell you goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 3/10/2013 9:34:00 PM
HI JULIE, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:35:00 AM
Julie congrats on your win and I am glad it is not goodbye...David
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Date: 3/10/2013 12:06:00 AM
This one was quite moving. Congrats for your win, Julie.
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Date: 2/13/2013 12:49:00 PM
This is how I feel when I get my heart broken.... very powerful poem
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Date: 2/13/2013 9:15:00 AM
awesome new form friend Julie. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Maria
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