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I died one thousand deaths for you, with this pain I may never know how to love again- arthritis swells my fingers and I am left remembering the last time you warmed them if you needed light I'd rope the sun; since you left I’ve come undone ~one thousand deaths~ 50 words total September 27, 2019 Caren Krutsinger Any Poem You Want to Write 50 Words or Less Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/27/2019 10:10:00 PM
This is a true gem. I totally loved it... God bless you, sweet friend
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/29/2019 10:31:00 AM
You comment on all of my poems. I feel undeserving but at the same time appreciate it more than you will ever know. So, be blessed sweet Regina :)-luloo
Date: 9/27/2019 9:41:00 PM
poignantly beautiful ...i adore this, you always touch me with your poems...another fabulous write! hugs :)
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Date: 9/29/2019 10:30:00 AM
awww thanks sweet Sandy, you always make me smile in your own special way. :)-luloo
Date: 9/27/2019 4:09:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem, Luloo:-) GL in the contest! Check email...
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/29/2019 10:30:00 AM
thank you dear Edward, hugs :)-luloo
Date: 9/27/2019 1:53:00 PM
Well, no need for me to enter this contest this is 1st place for sure!
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/29/2019 10:29:00 AM
thanks dear Bobby, this poem was tough for me to write. :)-luloo
Date: 9/27/2019 1:47:00 PM
I loved this Lu Loo. So much deep affection runs through this poem.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/29/2019 10:27:00 AM
thank you so much sweet Chris :)-luloo