Beautiful Scars Poet Free verse

Dying For You

I died one thousand deaths for you,
with this pain I may never know
how to love again-
arthritis swells my fingers and
I am left remembering the last
time you warmed them

if you needed light
I'd rope the sun;
since you left
I’ve come undone

~one thousand deaths~



50 words total

September 27, 2019
Caren Krutsinger
Any Poem You Want to Write 50 Words or Less Poetry Contest

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Regina Mcintosh September 27, 2019 at 10:10 PM This is a true gem. I totally loved it... God bless you, sweet friend Beautiful Scars September 29, 2019 at 10:31 AM You comment on all of my poems. I feel undeserving but at the same time appreciate it more than you will ever know. So, be blessed sweet Regina :)-luloo

Sandra Adams September 27, 2019 at 9:41 PM poignantly beautiful ...i adore this, you always touch me with your poems...another fabulous write! hugs :) Beautiful Scars September 29, 2019 at 10:30 AM awww thanks sweet Sandy, you always make me smile in your own special way. :)-luloo

Edward Ibeh September 27, 2019 at 4:09 PM This is a beautiful poem, Luloo:-) GL in the contest! Check email... Beautiful Scars September 29, 2019 at 10:30 AM thank you dear Edward, hugs :)-luloo

Bobby May September 27, 2019 at 1:53 PM Well, no need for me to enter this contest this is 1st place for sure! Beautiful Scars September 29, 2019 at 10:29 AM thanks dear Bobby, this poem was tough for me to write. :)-luloo

Chris Green September 27, 2019 at 1:47 PM I loved this Lu Loo. So much deep affection runs through this poem. Beautiful Scars September 29, 2019 at 10:27 AM thank you so much sweet Chris :)-luloo