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Dying Breath

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One last breath A life extinguished All that’s left Few things Lasting memories In an instant The end And suddenly It’s over in a wink AP: 2nd place 2021, Honorable Mention 2020, Front Page Pick 2022 Posted on April 13, 2019

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Date: 4/15/2019 11:50:00 AM
Powerful I've been there
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2019 12:01:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 4/13/2019 12:35:00 PM
so sad, Line. I watched my kitty be put to sleep a few weeks back. I could see no last beath. She just faded away.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/13/2019 12:39:00 PM
So sad. Thanks for your visit and for sharing, Andrea. Pets give so much and are so innocent. No wonder we love them so much.

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