Dying

When they told me I am dying, 
I thought: I must turn out the light; 
Before things get too bad, 
I must turn it out myself. 

Now, too weak to reach the switch, 
I am a slave to slow torture, 
Never knowing when it will end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 24, 2011 at 1:00 PM
Paul ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d
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April 24, 2011 at 11:23 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week Paul Rgds Janette
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April 19, 2011 at 7:40 AM
Sad to know that when is sooner than one thought...Congratulations on your poem being featured this week,Paul. I hope it is fiction! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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April 18, 2011 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations onyour poem being featured this week, Paul
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October 11, 2009 at 9:35 AM
I'm so sorry, Paul. Keep writing. Kim
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