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Dying

Controlled to extremes Unable to move Without you leering at me I slowly starve of reality Of air Suffocating Drowning 'Me' Dies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/24/2009 8:47:00 AM
WOW!!! AWESOME!!!!
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Date: 4/13/2009 3:55:00 PM
Hope this is not a reflection of your reality. Being controlled in a relationship is a nightmare. A very sad and intense write. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:08:00 AM
When "me" dies, does not the soul bloom a true self to light? Anna Marie, I feel deep echoes of he gospel's work in the brevity and power of this. Nice job.
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