Amy Green Poet Haiku

Dyaus' Rainbow Palette

Hues and crests from God

   Both a promise, and blessing-

       Only seen in spring.


Striking features true

  In minds of religious view-

        Punish the wicked.


Noah, only knew

   Covenant, words from his lips-

      Spoke to all beings.


All animals joined

   With some of Noah's own kin-

      Is that not a sin?


My view subjective
    
   *Dyaus' palette effective-

     Poet's perspective.




      

      

 * Dyaus- A god of the sky

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Matthew Anish May 27, 2012 at 7:12 AM I like the way you used this form. Please let me know what "Hughes and crests" means, Peace& Love Matthew Anish Amy Green May 27, 2012 at 1:26 PM Hughes and crest are describing the arch and colors of the rainbow- but now that I really look at it- hughes is spelled wrong- LOL. Should be hues.. thanks for pointing that out

Larry Belt May 18, 2012 at 6:46 AM Awesome Haiku my friend.....Larry

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2012 at 9:20 PM quite an interesting set of haiku, Amy. It's so good to see you here again and putting up new poems!!