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Dyaus' Rainbow Palette

Hues and crests from God Both a promise, and blessing- Only seen in spring. Striking features true In minds of religious view- Punish the wicked. Noah, only knew Covenant, words from his lips- Spoke to all beings. All animals joined With some of Noah's own kin- Is that not a sin? My view subjective *Dyaus' palette effective- Poet's perspective. * Dyaus- A god of the sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 5/27/2012 7:12:00 AM
I like the way you used this form. Please let me know what "Hughes and crests" means, Peace& Love Matthew Anish
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Amy Green
Date: 5/27/2012 1:26:00 PM
Hughes and crest are describing the arch and colors of the rainbow- but now that I really look at it- hughes is spelled wrong- LOL. Should be hues.. thanks for pointing that out
Date: 5/18/2012 6:46:00 AM
Awesome Haiku my friend.....Larry
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Date: 5/11/2012 9:20:00 PM
quite an interesting set of haiku, Amy. It's so good to see you here again and putting up new poems!!
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