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fear mirrors desire roots in ego attachment stillness sets us free dwell in void of cessation each moment celebration 29-May-2021 Tanka Contest Poetry Contest Sponsor: ML Kiser

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Date: 5/30/2021 8:18:00 PM
The void of cessation is where peace and calm originate. Wonderful tanka, Seeker. :) gw
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Date: 5/30/2021 10:53:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon! :)
Date: 5/30/2021 1:48:00 PM
so deep this tanka. I like the contrasts you use.
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Date: 5/30/2021 10:52:00 PM
Contest requirement - juxtaposition but works well to convey this idea, I think
Date: 5/29/2021 12:53:00 AM
And where is the void?
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Date: 5/29/2021 1:17:00 AM
In our heart

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