Notes About The Poem

Dweller of the Void

fear mirrors desire
roots in ego attachment 
stillness sets us free
dwell in void of cessation
each moment celebration

29-May-2021

Tanka Contest Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: ML Kiser
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Wolf Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 8:18 PM
The void of cessation is where peace and calm originate. Wonderful tanka, Seeker. :) gw
Seeker Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 10:53 PM
Thanks, Gershon! :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 1:48 PM
so deep this tanka. I like the contrasts you use.
Seeker Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 10:52 PM
Contest requirement - juxtaposition but works well to convey this idea, I think
Buhagiar Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 12:53 AM
And where is the void?
Seeker Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 1:17 AM
In our heart
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