Len Gasun Poet Rhyme

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12.07pm SAug. 12, 2025

 

Dweller Of Our Hearts

Line of inquiry: 
"the essence in us is the same as the essence of the sun."
                 by Unseeking Seeker

Sun is the center of the universe, the main source of light
Designed by our Heavenly Creator, with all His power and might
For He, our God is the light and in Him, no darkness at all
His Light was made to generate the sun’s life-sustenance role
And dwelt in every soul when He gave life to us, His people
To be good stewards of His creations, so in sins we won’t fall.

Essence in us is the same as the essence of the sun
Missioned to make our life God’s reflection to others…shine!
For He, our God is the light and in Him, no darkness at all
Created in His image, like Him with the sun, we’re so beautiful!
Holy Spirit is God’s dwelling light in us, giving hope like sunrise
Glows at sunset through prayers, tomorrow is a blest surprise!

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Rowena Velasco August 20, 2025 at 9:50 AM Bright and uplifting! I like how the sun mirrors God’s light in us, and the repeated line really drives home the hope and warmth in the poem. Len Gasun September 7, 2025 at 3:00 AM Thanks again belatedly my dear poet friend, Rowena for reading my poem and your uplifting words. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues August 17, 2025 at 11:56 AM Essence in us is the same as the essence of the sun Missioned to make our life God’s reflection to others…shine… God bless! Len Gasun September 7, 2025 at 2:55 AM Belated thank you for taking my time to read and leave kind words to my poem my dear poet friend Kim. God bless you too! Hugs

CayCay Godwin August 14, 2025 at 8:55 AM I enjoyed reading your lovely and uplifting spiritual poem. May your light always shine purely bright just as this poem surely will. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Len Gasun August 31, 2025 at 7:47 AM Belated thank you my dear poet friend Caycay. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Nette Onclaud August 12, 2025 at 7:57 PM ohh i get the enlightening feel of your lines, len...thankyou for nourishing my soul today, friend! what a gem! Len Gasun August 31, 2025 at 7:32 AM I thank you more belatedly my dear poet friend Nette for reading my poem and your uplifting words. So glad this poem had enlightening feel on you. Thanks a lot again. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith August 12, 2025 at 12:52 PM WOW!!! What a wonderful write you have here. Great Ending... "Good Luck" A winner to me. Hugs... Have a lovely day writing away.......... Len Gasun August 31, 2025 at 7:26 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem and your words of encouragement my dear poet friend Paula. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen August 12, 2025 at 4:50 AM - Beautiful for the soul and heart, Len :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Len Gasun August 30, 2025 at 8:23 PM Belated thanks for reading my poem, your inspiring words and loving best wishes my dearest poet friend, Anne-lise. God bless you always and your poetry! Hugs