Line of Enquiry: 'the essence in us is the same as the essence of the sun"
Dweller of the Heart Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker
11/8/2025
The essence of the sun is deep within my heart and soul. It brings me warmth when I am cold to brighten up my mood. To see the sun high in the sky on a cloudless day Is my therapy, I feel replenished, and surrounded with happiness. For if I am sun replenished, then I can replenish those around me. Bringing warmth to others when they may feel down and out. And by radiating a joyful demeanour and staying positive, I see the sun rise in them as they begin to shine. Without the sun, we would wither and fail to thrive. All creatures on earth would disappear. Leaving a desolate, cold, shrivelled up, space. This is not a place I would ever choose to be. Therefore, the sun must reside within our very being. Although, at times as it hides behind cloudy skies, Knowing it will come out again, bringing warmth, to everything. Continuing our survival, is why I love the sun.
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