Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Dutch Wedding Day Dessert

Many many years ago
When I was very small
We attended a wedding in Amsterdam
This memory I recall

Jan and Astrid had got married
Balloons decorated the wedding hall
Wedding favours were scattered on the table …
Sugared almonds, I could have eaten them all!

The wedding breakfast was served
We had all enjoyed a tasty meal
Soon it was time to cut the cake
Something sweet would be ideal

The wedding cake was ‘wheeled’ in
I couldn’t believe my eyes
Tier upon tier of ice cream cake
My mouth dropped open in surprise

To this very day I have never seen
A wedding cake made of ice cream!

This is a true story 
FYI ‘Jan’ is a male name meaning John and is pronounced Yann or Yaan in Dutch

12~18~15
Contest combination of three words
List 2 chosen – dessert, a memory you have, balloons
Sponsored by Laura Loo

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Hansteven Selfa January 12, 2016 at 8:13 AM Jan, congratulations for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans Jan Allison January 12, 2016 at 1:05 PM Thanks Hansteven:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A January 10, 2016 at 11:14 PM Jan Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~ . Jan Allison January 11, 2016 at 1:46 AM Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick January 6, 2016 at 3:15 PM CONGRATS ON YOUR WINNING WORK..WAY TO GO!!!! SARA Jan Allison January 7, 2016 at 11:07 AM Thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper January 5, 2016 at 2:02 PM Mmmm.... ice-cream cake:) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Jan Allison January 5, 2016 at 2:45 PM Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A January 4, 2016 at 10:18 AM JAN, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT* Jan Allison January 4, 2016 at 12:55 PM Thanks so much Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight January 3, 2016 at 6:55 PM A great true story retold by your even greater poem, Jan. Congrats on your fine First Place win. Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison January 4, 2016 at 1:11 AM Thanks so much Sandra I was delighted LuLoo liked it so much:-) hugs jan xx

David Fisher January 3, 2016 at 3:50 PM Tasty poem and win Jan. I'd scream getting ice cream in my face, if they did that. Jan Allison January 3, 2016 at 3:53 PM It brought back so many memories David and I can share them with mum her short term memory is terrible but she loves talking about our many trips to Amsterdam:-) hugs jan xx

Balveen Cheema January 3, 2016 at 11:22 AM My mouth is watering! A lip smacking win, Jan! Congrats! Jan Allison January 3, 2016 at 11:59 AM Thanks Balveen I was delighted LuLoo liked the poem so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars January 3, 2016 at 10:30 AM Jan, congrats on your win in my contest! Very funny and clever poem! It's the best that its a true story!!! Thank you for your participation. I couldn't wait to see who wrote this..-luloo :) Jan Allison January 3, 2016 at 10:33 AM Yes it was a true story from when i was about 5 or 6 - mum and I still talk about our trips to Amsterdam it is a great way for her to keep the memory going:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie December 22, 2015 at 6:03 PM Hello Jan... so Jan, did you gather around the wedding cake and eat it with spoons before it melted - thanks again Jan - Lindsay Jan Allison December 22, 2015 at 6:06 PM no lol but it was served very quickly lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eric Boddie December 19, 2015 at 4:47 PM jan you have done it again....your words intoxicate better than gin....they get you high and leave you up there from here....you know how much I Love being in the janosphere....;) Jan Allison December 19, 2015 at 5:00 PM Thanks for making me smile Eric:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso December 18, 2015 at 10:25 PM I am so glad you never married a Dutchman named John! Be a little confusing, Jan & Jan !!!!! Jan Allison December 19, 2015 at 7:18 AM LOL Ithat thought had crossed my mind:-) I guess I am lucky my christian name isn't Alison lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus December 18, 2015 at 5:10 PM Well done, Jan...this true story fitted Laura's bill exactly. They must have kept that cake in cold storage!! I am still trying to find time to write one for this contest. Hugs // paul Jan Allison December 18, 2015 at 5:14 PM I still have such vivid memories of it Peter it sure gave the wedding that 'wow' factor - :-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich December 18, 2015 at 3:57 PM I love ice cream cakes!!! Jan Allison December 18, 2015 at 4:06 PM I've never seen anything like the cake at the wedding - it was so unique - I remember it was draped in fine golden spun sugar oh I wish we had a picture I could show you:-( Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich December 18, 2015 at 3:56 PM wow, Jan, you did a fantastic job with this challenge. You are really honing your skills!! great story too. Jan Allison December 18, 2015 at 4:04 PM Thanks Andrea if you read Thomas's poem you will know YOU are inspitational and I aspire to write like you - am amazed how far I have come in 2 years since I wrote my first poem 'splendid isolation':-) hugs Jan xx

Rahy Hy December 18, 2015 at 1:39 PM Jan, you paint with your poetry... I could almost see myself at this wedding... Best of luck with the contest! Jan Allison December 18, 2015 at 1:49 PM Thank you so much for the lovely comment Rahy I wish we had a photograph - I was only about 5 or 6 at the time but to this day mum and I still talk about Amsterdam and the many times we visited -mum's memory of the past is so clear yet her short term memory is going. Mum had a pen pal 'Ans' and we used to go over to stay with her and her family about 4 or 5 times a year - Jan is their eldest son:-) hugs jan xx