Dusty Road

A. W. Nutter
 
Walking along the dusty road
The boy in me begins to unfold
Transforming into a barefoot child
Escaping home and running wild
 
Leaving my troubles far behind
Out of sight but not out of mind
Dust clouds cover but can not hide
Mental cells where the demons abide
 
Painful thoughts I refuse to embrace
Happy memories I try to retrace
The magical pond suddenly appears
Trying to hold back foolish tears
 
The cooling water engulfs the skin
Loving caresses from an old friend
Basking in the pool of tranquility
A childhood haven from reality
 
A place to heal when under duress
Evil memories blocked from access
A spiritual place helping me transcend
As out of the darkness I try to ascend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Inka Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Perfect rhyme, and well conveyed messege, and nice imagery too
Beesley Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 1:54 PM
o the good and bad old days of being a youngster
Kohls Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 1:40 AM
Great read...enjoy your work
Brown Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 7:09 AM
Congratulations Anthony on your win in Frank Herrera's contest "Images". Love, Carol
George   Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 2:05 AM
A very vivi heartflt story, Anthony. Congratulations on your win. Love, Lainie
Adeite Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Frank’s contest. May you have many more wins as you keep your passionate pen alive… Please keep writing great poems, and enjoy this honor. Love, Adeleke
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July 7, 2010 at 9:38 AM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Images contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen
Sweetheart Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 5:28 AM
Congrats Anthony on your winning poem in the Images contest with this brilliant write .. wonderful words.. enjoy.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii .. on vacation... AlohA...
Pattison Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 7:16 AM
A very well thought of poem. I believe we all get that impulse to flee from our every day concerns to try and make sense of our deeper emotions that are always a prisoner, an undercurrent- to that which is mundane surfacing. Regards, Gavin.
Harrison Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 3:05 PM
Powerful poem, I loved the flow. However it's better to let them surface no matter how bad they are. Enjoyed!
George   Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 10:08 AM
Isn't it amazing how something can trigger so many memories from our past? Great writing, Anthony. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments. Lainie
Meyer Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 5:38 PM
I enjoyed this poem very much as it brought back memories of my childhood haven---a special tree that I climbed. Thank you for your comment on my poem about grandchildren and what they hear in the summer.
Neels Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 2:59 AM
Wow, love this piece.. its like going back to a place long forgotten...
Foster Avatar
May 8, 2010 at 7:25 PM
A lovely flow in this rhyming verse, nothing forced, it reads so well. The imagery of the man seeking refuge in his childhood safe places is quite outstanding. well written Anthony...Margaret
Strand Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 8:12 AM
The best way to Anthony is as you say from within,if only we take time to listen in to that quiet voice.Rgds Brian
W Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 7:12 PM
Thank you for the trip back to my childhood, where everything seemed easy and carefree. I'll never quite understand why everyone was in such a rush to grow up! Fantastic write, Anthony, I enjoyed it very much.
K. Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 4:59 PM
Thanks for this inspiring poem, Anthony--how wonderful to be a child again and to be able to find that place of relief within ourselves--thank you as well for your comments :)
Mason Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 12:27 PM
AWESOME ... I love it and will add it to my "favorite" list ... that inner child that always brings healing (Isaiah 11:6) inspite of the fact that that is where my pain began !! Great write here, Anthony!!
Knop Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 9:45 AM
Great write and tribute to childhood, Anthony!!! Enjoyed reading your poem today. And thanks for your comment...Hope you had a nice weekend...Gert
Brown Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 11:54 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Anthony. Have a nice weekend. Love, Carol
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