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Dust Off a Memory

You me silent caravan our breath danced in clouds scent of white linen mixed with soap two closing silhouettes on orange floral curtains velvet textures brush away nervousness gnawing with the hunger of those first kisses For contest 'dust off a memory', sponsor Broken Wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/13/2017 10:48:00 PM
Simply breathtaking! Love this Fibonacci.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/15/2017 11:39:00 PM
Thanks, Afzal, appreciate the visit. Regards, Viv
Date: 10/31/2017 6:41:00 PM
You've let us look through the crack where the curtains didn't quite meet.....
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Date: 10/29/2017 11:12:00 AM
AH first loves are great memories!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/29/2017 11:58:00 PM
Indeedy, Arthur, I was smitten. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 10/29/2017 5:28:00 AM
So lovely! Feel like I am there.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/29/2017 11:58:00 PM
It was a very cold morning, Kim. We were due to go on a day trip that got cancelled literally at the last minute. My girlfriend's parents had a caravan in their farmyard :)

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